Really loving how you expanded the BMB metaphor throughout the essay and into the conclusion, and the extra details you added to augment your analysis e.g. the expansion on Fran's hair. The details really drive it home!
Plus, got to enjoy your interpretation of the peacock, which is well-stated. I think anyone who reads your piece can feel how much you love this short story. :) Great job!
Good essay.
Thank you, sir
Really loving how you expanded the BMB metaphor throughout the essay and into the conclusion, and the extra details you added to augment your analysis e.g. the expansion on Fran's hair. The details really drive it home!
Plus, got to enjoy your interpretation of the peacock, which is well-stated. I think anyone who reads your piece can feel how much you love this short story. :) Great job!
Thank you! Your edits pushed me to expand on the BMB :)